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    Website Comments Please!

    I just uploaded my website, http://cleanrightprowash.com and would appreciate any comments or feedback on it. I'm not sold on the header graphics, they may change. It's very animated, I don't know if that's distracting or attention grabbing. Please let me know what you think!
    Gary Twing
    Clean Right Pro Wash, LLC
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    Ok, just wanted to acknowledge upfront that the pics on the site aren't mine, they're from Google. I just wanted to put some in as placeholders and replace them with mine as I get them. Nowhere do I say that they're mine, just that they're Sample Photos or "Here are some photos of just a few of the pressure washing services that we provide".
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    You ask so. Do not say light commercial just say commercial and if a job to big comes in that is great and figure it out or sub it out. Do not even use the word Damage or anything negative, always positive. Last thing you should do is bring up other power washers and especially in a negative way. Format looks good just a couple other wording thing but keep going.
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    Brian Wendling
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    Thanks Brian, you make some good points I'll make the changes.
    Gary Twing
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    Phone number on top. should be seen without scrolling, contact form on every page visibly accessible. Put pics on there when you get them. Don't forget to name and tag them. Don't forget even though there isn't a lot of content on there, when you are searching from a phone, everything is squashed and you have some scrolling to do. You lose people after 10 seconds, if they don't see what they are interested in. My philosophy is phone number, services, and a call to action should be right in their face when they click on your site.

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    Thanks for the input Ralph, again good points! I'm working on it now.
    Gary Twing
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    remove the owner quote and put in two big picture links. Commercial and residential with a "click here".
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    Ok, I made some changes. Please give me your wisdom! Right now I've only uploaded the desk/laptop version, when I'm done making changes I'll create & upload the Smartphone & Tablet versions. In other words, if you try to view it with your phone/tablet now the site will display & scale to fit but the text will be small.
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    Wow that looks good
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    Looking good have you thought about having a blog

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